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ShineOne
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ernsthafte battle partner/in gesucht
you start first. 16 bars.
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10.08.2007 10:45 |
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Edmund Stoiber
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ok, weil du es bist.
so, who is this shine? ill be honest- no one knows.
he wants to battle in english? OKAY! YO, YO, YO,
youre a complex, boy, nothing but a walking failure
try to compensate something? become a bodybuilder.
yeah, you might have flow, but BOY would you get burned in new york.
not a bit originality. ive all heard it before.
keep on hating others, keep thinking that youre true with this rapshit-
in the US, they wouldnt listen to you for a second.
where are your tracks? there aint none. youre just a wannabe gee.
you just got freestyles that got people.. *yawn*... falling asleep.
still pissed that someone took your mic back then in d-town
so let me take this line for a laugh. HAHAHAHHAAHAHAHA! DU KLEINES MÄDCHEN! (no sexisto)
dont act like some miserable bum...
get it!! it was to prevent the crowd from audiovisual harm!!
i dont wanna talk shit like "this flow is the dopest",
ill just rip your face apart, put it back together blindfolded- no one will notice.
well, at least not your mama, lets get it straight-
youre so small, she hasnt seen your face since you were eight.
oops. sorry. i guess that was a bit TOO personal.
but with a face like that, you cant expect people to be merciful.
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ich habe farid bang eine cola ohne eis gebracht.
Dieser Beitrag wurde 1 mal editiert, zum letzten Mal von Edmund Stoiber: 16.08.2007 12:05.
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16.08.2007 12:03 |
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im like a teethless tramp, because i got nottin for ya/
in my lyrical labyrinth rappers are feeling themselves lost like sawyer/
I got the face of an 6 year old boy and the body of a body builder/
my narcism forces my selve to wake up at night and make from my body bilder/
you are a blind bat like val kilmer, and my hunting rifle is going to kill ya/
you can compare the pubic hair of your girl friend to the beard of adolf hitler/
you are no competitiion just like shine one/
even if i would be an christmas tree with no electricity, i would shine on.....
NO JOKE...
TRUE STORY...
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16.08.2007 12:43 |
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ShineOne
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max frisch - falsch. 16 bars.
edmund - eh ironisch gemeint von dir, aber antwort gern. weil dus bist, panik.
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16.08.2007 21:17 |
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laylah
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16.08.2007 22:53 |
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ShineOne
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edmund :
my flow is not new york, my flow is pure shine, son /
my raps ? the definition of nothing but pure rhymes, dun /
you're blinded by my shine, son, yes, i'm true to this rapshit /
stay put at home, with your ugly ass wife & your crack kids /
take another smack hit, stay blinded in your drug illusion /
hidin' your identity, comin' with anecdotes, tryin' confusion ? /
my rap's are like infusions, into your veins like pure smack /
come, meet me onstage, i'll fuck your ass, be sure o' that /
always watch your back, you'll never know who's in the dark /
my rhymes are creatin' hellfire, yours ? just merely spark /
i hunt you down like sharks would do to a surfer in open seas /
you think your weak ass rhymes provoke me ? quit smokin', G /
as long as you don't reveal your person to me in a personal talk /
ì'll make the walk on the green mile your very personal walk /
death row marked with arsenal chalk, spreadin' sherm on a lark /
aren't you ashamed that it's rappers like curse that you stalk ? /
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17.08.2007 09:22 |
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Karte
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edmund :
my raps ? the definition of nothing but pure rhymes, dun /
i'm true to this rapshit /
come, meet me onstage, i'll fuck your ass, be sure o' that /
weak ass rhymes
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Hihi das ist witzig das du jetzt einfach mit solchen billigen platten Klischee Floskeln antwortest obwohl Edmund genau das immer kritisiert. 
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17.08.2007 11:28 |
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ShineOne
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Hihi das ist witzig das du jetzt einfach mit solchen billigen platten Klischee Floskeln antwortest obwohl Edmund genau das immer kritisiert.
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hihi das ist witzig dass du genau die lines rauspickst und somit die wenigen platten herauskristallisierst um sie ins lcherliche zu ziehen... hihi, witzig... hihi... 
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17.08.2007 12:38 |
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Karte
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Das ist immerhin ein Viertel des Textes
du httest ja auch einfach ganz drauf verzichten können 
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17.08.2007 12:40 |
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ShineOne
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drauf geschissen, mir gehts um edmunds antwort und was ich darauf schreiben werde, nicht um deine billige provomeinung zu 2 ganzen und 2 halben bars.
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17.08.2007 12:42 |
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Edmund Stoiber
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yo, sis is my konter for you. ei hope ju see that i took manche of your lines.
pure shine? what the hell. youre just the copy of copy/
please drive into a wall and blame it on some paparazzi (diana!)/
im not blinded by your shine. youre simply to ugly to look at/
i wouldnt even be able to do so if i actually took crack!/
cooked crack- cheah cheah, dipset, dipset/
cracking your jaw open- you might need a sixpack of blistex./
you want to fuck my ass on stage? sure, why not, there we go/
it might be your only chance ever to get in some slippery hole/
but let me warn you, you'll never know what's in the dark /
there might be a turd that i might want to drop on your cock/
but i guess it doesnt matter as it matches your smell/
afterwards so ashamed you wont even be checking your mail/
so yeah, we fucked, so fuck the personal talk /
you want a friend, go do a picninc with my turd in the park!/
you can keep it, its yours, now have respect and be quiet/
cause its not just matching your smell- but also matching your size!(mr. hankey!)/
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ich habe farid bang eine cola ohne eis gebracht.
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18.08.2007 16:26 |
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ShineOne
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copy of copy ? so fresh & motivated that no one can stop me /
labels spreadin' intern memos that none should ever drop me /
you got a small cock, G, if you fuck holes, it's like throwin' /
a sausage into a house, my dick's so enhanced, it's glowin' /
your favourite hobbies are blowin', ridin', fuckin' & suckin' /
the body you got is crippled and your face is a pumpkin /
i noticed that quite a few times you did mention your turds /
you must have some trauma, did you get shitted on by birds ? /
your sperm looks like curd, you should use more meaningful words /
but your main problem is : you loosin' contenance, truth hurts /
body- or penis size is the criteria that you judge another rapper ? /
you'll drown in hysteria while you get mugged by another rapper /
mr. shine up in your crib, fuckin' your parents, killin' your parrot /
stompin' on your carrots, throwin' with maggots, stupid faggot /
your house will look ragged after i been through like a tornado /
i'm so fly, on my dick, i got a tattoo of the face of erykah badu /
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18.08.2007 16:46 |
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Edmund Stoiber
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im getting tired of this. please, quit the yappin, punk
get it- LABELS DONT KNOW YOU. BECAUSE YOU HAVE NO SONGS.
and that sausage line? well, ive heard it in german.
biting here and there, at night in the sewers gurglinvermin.
and its funny how you try to battle me by saying im gay-
homophobic idiot, what you need is a bottle smacked to your face.
and well, its not "shitted". its actually "shit".
grammar, bwoy. swallow a PONS, i want to see you gagging on it.
meaningful words? like "you got a small cock, G"?
reading this fucks up my head like getting scalped by an apache. (bo!)
i dont judge you by your size. it just makes me laugh, i cant help it.
its like a mother naming her child "willibald hugo ben-elvis".
yeah, fuck my parents, yeah, omigosh what a little kid.
how can i answer to this bullshit. how can one rhyme so irrelevant.
and now lets end this please- im getting kinda tired from this battle
plus i guess you will be kicked anyway for calling me a faggot.(DU HOMOPHOBE SCHWUCHTEL!)
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ich habe farid bang eine cola ohne eis gebracht.
Dieser Beitrag wurde 3 mal editiert, zum letzten Mal von Edmund Stoiber: 18.08.2007 17:16.
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18.08.2007 17:04 |
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Edmund Stoiber ist sehr gut in diesen Battle!
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18.08.2007 17:34 |
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ShineOne
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the faggot line is battle, son, no need to care about your feelings /
when i'm finished with you, your brain's splattered on the ceiling /
you're puking, hold on to the reeling, while titanic sinks deeper /
it was me who bombed your parent's house, call me a sleeper /
i know the PONS by heart, so be sure, i'll never be gagging /
but YOU need to shut off the pc, get some fresh air plus shagging /
what i do to you is called ragging, classical boasting and bragging /
after killing you, i'll draw a big swastika on your dick with an edding /
yeah, i don't care if my name's shine, midget, dwarfling or elvis /
but see that ugly old woman which is your ma ? go eat her pelvis /
how arrogant your self is, cripples like you don't know being humble /
i'm coming like granite rocks into your poor life to see you stumble /
battlin' me is royal rumble, only one rapper stays in the ring alive /
i'm so fuckin' full of zest for life that even my thing's alive /
so come on, fuckin' kid, you didn't even yet bring a line /
you're a stingless stingray that never could sting a shine /
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Edmund Stoiber ist sehr gut in diesen Battle! |
ach ja ? wie gut, dass du dich heute erst angemeldet hast, um DIESEN beitrag zu schreiben, ede. h, zyklop.
Dieser Beitrag wurde 1 mal editiert, zum letzten Mal von ShineOne: 18.08.2007 18:19.
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18.08.2007 18:18 |
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ShineOne
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wertvoller beitrag ! weiter so !
ps. ede, du bist dran.
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18.08.2007 19:29 |
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Edmund Stoiber
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ich weiß nicht, ich glaub ich schreib als "zyklop" weiter.
ps: das mit den homophoben lines CHECKST du tatschlich nicht, oder?
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ich habe farid bang eine cola ohne eis gebracht.
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